Tutor feedback for Assignment 4 Towards Los Angeles by Dorothea Lange.

Below is the feedback I recieved from my tutor in regard to my critical review for Assignment 4. Since my feedback I have signed up and completed work with the Royal Literary Fund. This has started my journey towards mastering the skill of writing in an academic way.

I have begun to read Umberto Eco “How to write a thesis” and have read “Cite them rite”.

I have also completed an online course in Japanese Stab Binding and have ordered the materials and the tools to make a photobook with the control over the whole process.