After a delay when my tutor and I kept missing each other due to my adventures down South. I finally received an email from him with some areas to work on.

1. Research Anthropomorphism.

2. Add reference to environments having no emotions.

3. Identity of the birds in my photos.

4. Replace the shots for “That melted the wings wax”, “It was spring” and “A farmer was ploughing his field.

5. Read Derek Gregory “Between the book and the lamp”.

6. Write about the books I have been reading to research the course so far.

7. Add reference to other posts to link my work.

Over all my tutor liked my work and his suggestions added to the overall effect of the images and the words.

At first I didn’t agree with changing the image for the farmer ploughs his field. But on looking through my images and reviewing the painting again I realised that this line has to have the third element. So I replaced with a shot with a bird and a whale. The whale being the third element (The Farmer).

My work clearly states that things don’t have feelings so I am a little unsure what my tutor wants me to add. I will take this up with him on my return.

The birds in the shots are all either Petrels or Albatross. The final shot shows Wilson’s Storm Petrels which are the size of swallows and amaze how they survive in such a inhospitable place.

I have downloaded Gregory’s essay and will read and review it shortly.

Likewise I will add general reviews over the coming weeks of the books and such like I have researched to help my work develop. These I will publish shortly.

I added a link to my work so viewers can find background information about the events that inspired this assignment.

Below are the three pictures I added in response to my tutor feedback.