Having read the feedback from my tutor I made the following changes to my work for Assignment 6.
You can find the feedback here.
https://michaelgreenlevel2landscapeblog.photo.blog/2020/09/03/feedback-on-assignment-6-transitions/
First I added a short describing why I decided on Shop Lane and what kind of a dynamic system it is. I considered removing the headlines but felt the work would lose its message. I therefore changed how they are presented from seperate slides to including the headlines on the slide with colours that blend in to the shot.
I had copied the links to the pages whilst editing the pages on WordPress which meant that when clicked the link took you to the edit page. So I spent some time checking all links take you to the intended destination.
Then I re-read Cite me (2005) and went back to my work simplifying my citations so as to ensure they don’t make reading the piece complicated. I also read online how to set up footnotes and have had a practise. I will use this shortly to see how it aids my work.
I have begun reading Greider, T and Garkovich, L (1994) Landscapes: The Social Construction of Nature and the Environment. Rural Sociology, 59, 1-24 It is interesting to read about what we are looking at when we look at a landscape.
I Looked at the book Yosemite in time book which was written by Rebecca Solnitt and the photographs taken by Mark Klett and Byron Wolf. In the book the colour photos have been superimposed with the old images of Adams, Weston and Muybridge they are accompanied by Solnitts words the images reminded me of the photos I took and imposed press images on in the Falklands, (See them here).
I am awaiting Raymond Williams book “the country and the city” (2011) to arrive from Amazon I have watched the video and it is another comparison between town and country over 200 years fascinating. Another way to look at things in the urban and rural areas of our nation to then compare them.
Next we discussed getting ready for assessment, it seems we now write about our learning’s measured against the objectives. This seems fair to me we will see.
Work Cited
Pears, Richard. Cite Them Rite. 6th ed. Pear Tree Books, 2005
Greider, T and Garkovich, L (1994) Landscapes: The Social Construction of Nature and the Environment. Rural Sociology, 59, 1-24
Solnitt, Rebecca, Byron Wolfe, and Mark Klett. Yosemite in Time. 1st ed. Vol. 1. 1 vols. Trinity University Press, n.d. https://www.klettandwolfe.com/2009/10/yosemite-in-time.html.
Williams, Raymond. Country and the City. 3rd ed. London: Chatto and Windus & Spokesman Books, 1973.


















