Assignment 4 Critical Review “Towards Los Angeles” by Dorothea Lange.

Towards Los Angeles Dorothea Lange 1936.

To complete this assignment I want to look at the photograph (1)“Towards Los Angeles” by Dorothea Lange. I chose this photograph as it is one of the lesser known works however to me it appeals showing pathos and humour in equal measure.

The photograph was taken in February 1936 during the Great Depression in the United States. It is a Silver Gelatin Print taken during her work around El Monte and San Fernando, California for the Farm Service Agency(FSA). It is taken on the road to Los Angeles.

The work is a landscape with a billboard and two men walking along a road lined with telegraph poles. The both carry luggage. The man on the left is carrying a suitcase in his left hand whilst the man on the right is carrying a canvass holdall on his right shoulder. They both look like Cowboys or at least farm hands. The luggage they carry looks to be in good condition and the clothes they are wearing appear to be in good order. The left mans right shoulder is drooping due to the weight of his luggage.

Both men`s necks and hands are visible and look well tanned from hard days working on the land that this road snakes across. Their feet are in different stages of walking the right mans left foot is off the ground and the man on the left has is right foot raised off the ground in a purposeful march into the future.

The road they are walking on is a tarmac road with a dusty verge and they are walking with the billboard to their right. The bill board says “Next time try the train”, with a line underneath that states “RELAX” accompanied by the name of the railroad placing the advert “Southern Pacific”. Underneath the billboard there is a trellis to finish off the billboard but it adds a new texture to the picture.

From the left edge of the picture run telegraph poles at least ten in number run along the verge of the road. On the right side a series of fence posts runs between the men and the billboard forming a barrier between the longed for better life and the walk. The surface of the dusty verge is indented with the treads of the cars which have pulled over off the tarmac for unknown purposes.

The billboard appears to be on land between the fence and open farmland the type of land these men are leaving. There is a second less prominent fence behind the billboard which emphasises the lead line it forms.

The sky makes me think it is blue and peppered with wispy clouds being blown into majestic lines which luckily add to the lead lines in the rest of the picture. It is a bright sunny day with little wind on a dry dusty day.

Leading lines.

The line of telegraph poles and the fences form a great lead line into the picture and give it feel of great perspective emphasising the distance these men have yet to travel. The billboard makes a statement just in its presence. The lines of perspective are added to by the tire tracks and even the clouds being blown into shape in the air. The right hand verge adds a shadow which breaks up the photo and adds the strongest lead line in the photograph.

Rule of thirds vertically.

The photo whilst having these strong lead lines also follows the rules of thirds if you draw a line through the left shoulder of the left man from top to bottom you get the space for the telegraph poles, Do the same through the right shoulder of the man on the right you get a space for the men with a third segment for the billboard.

Rule of thirds horizontally.

It also follows this rule horizontally the line of the horizon gives a large empty space, secondly a line across the picture level with the soles of the feet has all the detail in it. Finally the lower space has the tarmac road, dusty verge forming a second empty space.

The last observation I make looking at the photograph is that the men are taking no notice of the billboard they seem to be just focused on the task in hand the journey through this landscape to a hoped for better future.

Colour boxes and lines my eye sees.

Within the frame I see a triangle formed with the perspective of the road between the verge and the telegraph poles. Then two rectangles one is the obvious one in the billboard, the second one is formed by the sky. Finally I see a square around the two men walking?

At first glance the picture appears balanced and almost flat. However look further and you see the perspective formed by all the lines. Then the Billboard throws the picture out of balance and you see the writing this begins the questions and made me laugh when I read the words. The men throw the picture back into balance with all the action in the middle section.

The contrast is uniform in most of the picture, one element the dark verge to the right emphasises this lead line and takes your eye into the billboard.

The men’s feet walking into the scene give a sense of movement and hint at the long journey being completed. The lead lines emphasise this journey adding a sense that this walk is to be a long one which alternatively could be made by rail. The lines guide you into the photo and to the billboard. The sky and the land show that this is big country. Telegraph poles disappearing are the last element giving a sense of distance yet to travel.

My eye goes to the centre of the photo to begin with but this area is empty between the men and the board. Sometimes my eye goes left to the men and sometimes to the right to the billboard. My eye does this as the two main subjects are balanced on the central line. Then my eye looks at the telegraph poles and gets the sense of distance. The two men are darker than the rest of the photo so stand out due to their darkness. Then the board stands out because it is brighter than the men.

This photo is unusual as Lange usually takes photographs showing serious scenes. This has satire and subtle humour whilst still having a serious message. Shadows leading from the men’s feet hint that it is late in the day and they have already travelled far whilst having far to go. Reclining on a seat a man has a easy time travelling this same route whilst our two heroes have to suffer a long walk.

This work was created to document the suffering of the workers in the USA caused by the Great Depression. The failure of the crops coupled with banks foreclosing on loans led to mass migration of people across the USA. This is summed up in one simple shot. In 1/15th of a second Lange has caught the migration of agricultural workers who can’t even afford a rail ticket. She has then presented it with humour showing how these people just got up and got on with it. What choice did they have?

We must remember one of Dorothea Langes favourite sayings was (2)“Grab a hunk of lightning” I think she did that here.

I find this work rewarding to look at, The song from Monty Pythons (3)Life of Brian (4)“Always look on the bright side of life” comes to mind when I see this photograph. These men are walking to a hoped for brighter future. I see the same thing in Walker Evans photograph (5) “Hitch hikers near Vicksburg Mississippi”, however Lange has added the billboard in her shot, this added element makes it more palatable but takes nothing away from the serious message.

 This photograph has travelled well through the 80 years since it was taken. We have migrants across the world moving to find better futures for their families caused by financial institution and governmental mistakes. Different times same mistakes.

Looking at this exposure gives me a sense of hope for the future whilst dreading the past left behind. I wonder if these two men have left families behind who will join them once new hopeful lives have been created. Much like when I see the male refugees arriving on the shores of Europe today.

This work is poignant, funny, striking, timeless and disturbing all at the same time. It is a beautiful, simple depiction of an ugly subject. Much like some of the work we see in the media capturing the hope people have when they suffer indignities to get to a Promised Land.

This work is a huge success it makes me think. I want to know the stories behind the footsteps and I want to find out where the steps into the unknown led these two men. I want to understand what led to this 1/15th of a second. If I had seen the photo at the time it was taken I would have spent time to find out all I could and would be doing all I could to help. Whether it is beautiful or ugly is unimportant it is a success because it makes me care.

On first seeing this photograph I thought it was original, doing my research though led me to several examples where a similar scene was shown. August Sander shows a similar scene with (6)“Itinerant Basket Weavers (1929) as does Walker Evans in (5)“Hitchhikers near Vicksburg Mississippi” (1939). The difference is the billboard this adds a memorable element, at first funny then thought provoking. Interesting that Lange and Evans knew each other and took similar shots of the same subject in the same year did they compare and discuss their work?

Dorothea Lange used her camera well however she used her number one and number two instruments exquisitely, her eye and her brain. She will have had moments to see and set up this shot, she did it superbly.

In looking at this exposure I began by critiquing it as a photograph but have ended relishing it for the mood it creates. It captures the situation these people were forced into then shows the spirit of these two humans in dealing with their situation. Dorothea then shows us some humour and we empathise with these two men. We all enjoy a little humour even dark humour in times of trouble.

These individuals are going on a journey together, I am going with them. More than this I want to get involved not just with these individuals but with the struggle the farmers are suffering. Some critics of photography have pointed out that “privileged people” use their cameras to look down on poor subjects. I believe this work and others like it encourage us to find out more, when other organisations may not want us to see it at all.

All this from one photograph that at the outset looked like a simple, slightly humorous shot. If you set out with an interest and have an open mind it is amazing where these practitioners can take us.

Further Reading/recommended viewing.

Group f64 Mary Street Alinder published by Bloomsbury ISBN 978=1-420090-555-0.

Dorothea Lange: Grab a hunk of lightning American Masters video. Released 29th of August 2014.

References

(1)Lange, Dorothea. Towards Los Angeles. MoMA, Chicago.

(2)Grab a hunk of lightning. Directed by Dyanna Taylor. Performed by Dorothea Lange. 2014.

(3)The Life of Brian. Directed by Terry Jones. Performed by Monty Python. 1979.

(4)Python, Monty. Always look on the brightside of life. Comp. Eric Idle. 1979.

(5)Evans, Walker. Hitch hikers near Vicksburg Mississippi. FSA, San Francisco.

(6)Sander, August. Itinerant Basket Weavers. National Gallery of Victoria, Victoria.

Exercise 4.6 Proposal for the self directed project.

Below is my proposal for the self directed project. I created this in Pages on my iPad and have saved it as a PDF. Click on the file below to read my proposal offered to my tutor for my coursework.

Project Proposal

Prepared for: OCA Assignment 5

Prepared by: Michael Green 515037

6 March 2020

Proposal number: 2020-001

Objective

The objective of my work is to show people affected by the polar landscape they are experiencing.

What

A series of photographs in which the subject is immersed in the landscape. These photographs will be inspired by David Casper Friedrich’s work “Wanderer above the sea of fog”.

How and why

Through digital photography I will show people immersed in the landscapes of Antarctica. I want to show people who have been affected by the spectacular scenes in front of them. These people will have shown some kind of reaction to the vista, some stand, a lot are forced to sit and contemplate. All will have shown some kind of reaction to the big landscape they are part of, I will have to employ a degree of patience to obtain these images.

Wider Context

I have taken many photographs in this region and most don’t do justice to how the landscape makes you feel. Friedrich wanted to show the sublime in his landscapes, in fact he wanted to display the moment the sublime effects a person. He captured the sublime in “The Sea of ice” and this painting was one of the first to depict a polar scene. It shows an untouched icy landscape so isn’t the same as the work I want to create. Later he employs a “Rückenfigur” a figure shown from behind looking into the scene, I will employ the same method as Friedrich’s to try to show how its splendour makes you feel.

Influences

Friedrich’s has to be the biggest influence on my work. However Ansel Adams, Alfred Stieglitz and Sebastian Salgado all have an influence on it as well. Adams captured images with great detail and gave a feeling of big spaces. Stieglitz showed winter scenes in the city and showed the difficulties of being cold and working in the snow. Salgado captured the landscape and the animals in the landscape of Antarctica. I want to add the element of a person or persons moved by either the landscape and/or animals they are experiencing.

Output

A book of 17 prints 15 of which will be the photos, plus 1 map of locations plus 1 page outlining the work. To complete this work I will need to study Japanese Stab Book Binding. Page layout using Microsoft Publisher or equivalent. Printing techniques with newly acquired printer (these hours are not included in the budget below).

As we are locked down due to CoVid 19 I will show this in either a short time lapse video or perhaps a slideshow. I may consider both one time lapse showing the production process and a slideshow presenting the work.

Budget To produce my photo-book

The cost to produce a single publication for one copy for assessment.

DescriptionQuantityUnit PriceCost
Book binding Equipment1£36.99£‎36.99
Book binding Glue1£6.00£‎6.00
Printing17£0.85£‎14.45
Card for book covers2£0.20£‎   0.40
Time for binding, printing and video creation16£20.00£‎310.00
Total  £367.84

Exercise 4.5 Signifier-Signified.

After reading Barthes Rhetoric of image I had a couple of goes at using his method to look at photographs. I looked at a bill board advert and then just chose a photograph from my own collection. Doing this was enlightening. I look at pictures differently after doing so.

He likes structure so puts what he sees into boxes in a table. It makes looking at images and or text easier to break down. Doing this helped focus my mind on even the initially simple image as shown below.

For this exercise I have chose an image that doesn’t have a photograph at all. I did this as I was interested if the technique would work for a simple piece of typology. I think it does. I chose Coca Cola`s advert “You don’t have to stay between the lines”.

It is a bold image that leaps out of the page and appears very simple at first glance. However when you look it is a sophisticated image with a number of signs and signifiers. The table below shows the ones I saw. Maybe you may see more.

See the source image
SignSignifier
Red and WhiteCompany colours recognised the world over.
Bottle ShapeInstantly recognised even though most product delivered in cans.
Usual Simple lines broken.Implies you can break the rules. Hint at other products available.
Bottle shape made of dashed lines.Subtle hint at lines crossed rules broken edgy and maybe risky.
Hint at choiceMade me think of other options or alternative products in the range.
VignettingFocussed the eye on the product in the center of the image.

Anthropomorphism an introduction.

Definition: noun The attribution of human characteristics or behaviour to a god, animal or object.

Earliest example I can find is of a god/mystic from a cave in France painted 40,000 years ago. Zeus Apollo and other Greek deities all had human characteristics too. Hindu animal gods all have human traits to enhance their mystic properties.

God or wizard from French cave art.

First recorded use of the word in western culture is 1745-55 for applying human traits to Christian god! Male image at that.

Aesop’s fables all show animals with human personalities and morals.

Literature has many examples mainly in children’s novels. Here are five fron just the last century.

1. 1865 Alice in wonderland Lewis Carroll.

2. 1894 The Jungle book Rudyard Kipling.

3. 1928 The house at Pooh corner A.A. Milne.

4. 1954 Lord of the rings J.R.R. Tolkien.

5. 1972 Watership Down Richard Adams.

All have been made into films mainly by Disney Studios. Most have some animation within them.

Recent films include Cars, Planes, and Toy Story 1, 2, 3, 4. which move away from showing animals to depicting objects.

Cars Animation of McQueen.

Car design itself is a science of face usage from Smart Car and its friendly face to Ferrari and its angry face. Even the Trabant has a face on its front. Online you can find pages of car face design tips.

Ferrari shows its anger beautifully.

In art Giuseppe Arcimboldo uses inanimate fruit to form portraits the detail is sublime. Vegetables show the form and character of the subject. I wonder what they made of the images?

Giuseppe Arcemodi

Shinseungback Kimyonghun used face recognition surveillance software to look at the clouds in the sky. From 40,000 captured images 1000 clearly show detailed faces. The images were displayed in Bradford. At first I didn’t see them but when you do it is amazing how much detail you see.

Shinseungback Kimyonghun cloud faces.

As children we do this, playing with our imaginations, we grow out of it! Let’s not, let us use our imagination like a child again, the world would be better for it.

Finally…..for now! Agent Smith says in the Matrix “Humans are a disease Mr Anderson”. He is a Robot displaying feelings so even this pivotal scene in a film displays Anthropomorphism. It is everywhere look for yourself! What can you find?

Film quote from the Matrix by Agent Smith.

Review of David Matless book “Landcape and Englishness”.

(1)ISBN 978-1-78023-581-3

This book looks at what influences the landscape has had on the English being English in the post war years. The author has drawn from many sources, Art, History, Literature, Town Planning and Architecture to name just a few.

The book has many illustrations to support the written word, these are invaluable in helping the reader understand the visualisation which triggered the thought. An early example is the punch cartoon showing the ideal landscape sold to the soldier against the reality he returned to.

He draws from many sources even the AA road books from the 1950s. He discusses the way roads spread across the land then fill in with workplaces and homes. This made me think of the agent in the matrix movie who states “Humans are a disease, Mr Anderson”. (read about anthromophorcism here…………………………….).

Even the general fitness of the population is covered. Hiking and rambling being an ideal way to gain fitness and explore our landscapes. Related to this is a chapter on diet where the diet of Indians is examined at length comparing the varied diet of the healthy Indian with the poorer diet of Europeans with too much bread and processed food. Nothing changes.

All our landscapes are covered from the rural with Morris dancers and travellers to urban with its sprawl and centres of life.

This book is thought provoking and enlightening, I had never realised how much outside sources had influenced the way I see and use the English landscape. Plus the way that has been turned right around to influence what I will do to protect it.

David Matless has written with an easy to read style, with well informed sections that invite more in-depth research to explore the areas discussed. I am scouring second hand bookstores to find some of his source materials. This is a great book just to sit on a train and read.

Work Cited

(1) David Matless “Landscape and Englishness Reaktion Books London 1998.

Exercise 4.4 “Of Mother nature and Marlboro Men”.

At the beginning of Deborah Brights essay Of “Mother Natre and Marlboro Men” she states that middle America think landscape is generally conceived of as an upbeat and wholesome sort of subject which, like mom and apple pie, stands indisputably beyond politics and ideology and appeals to ‘timeless values.”

The taxonomic comes from European art history and refers to a painterly practice that gathered pace in the 17th and 18th centuries. They were either fields for noble actions or cultivated gardens inhabited by gods and or heroes.

In Holland new wealth celebrated property ownership. The English art world soon followed suit.

There were four types of landscape painting.

  1. Noble
Landscape with Orpheus (Unknown c1570)

2. Picturesque.

John Constable Haywain 1821

3.Sublime.

Storm in the mountains Albert Bierstadt (1870).

4.Mundane.

Rain in the Oak Grove Ivan Shishkin (1891)

Later in America (6)Norman Rockwell painted a main street showing “small town America”. Middle America the ruling mercantile masses want to show their identity in a national context. LS Lowry did the same in the UK but for the working classes. It excludes minorities only showing “normal”, straight people, excluding many from this idyll. This progressive era shows the antidote is a nature experience over the unhealthy urban life.

Stocksbridge Main Street at Christmas Norman Rockwell (1967 Norman Rockwell Collection)

Wild places began to be seen as god’s gift to the American (White people) to be preserved as a gift for future generations. Kenneth Erikson points out these places are ceremonial with codes of conduct (Park rules).

In 1908 69000 tourists went to worship in the eleven national parks by 1928 this had soared to 3,000,000. They were attracted by Posters, Postcards, Railroad adverts, Magazines and landscape art, not by the wilderness itself. The indigenous people were never shown as part of this landscape if they were they were a conquered novelty.

Railroads trumpeted their own individual routes as better than others using lavish posters and claims to do so. The demand for material to support this gave a boom to photography. Huge posters encouraged city dwellers to go out into the country to find the “Real Thing”.

Cowboy movies used the wild landscape as a backdrop to the onscreen action. “A man must be a man just to survive”, read the poster for the film the “valley of the silent men (1922).” This countryside was used to sell things as diverse as cigarettes to presidents.

Newspaper Advert for screening of a film at the Lyceum (1922).

Like Marlboro Men posters used to sell tobacco Ronald Reagan in White Stetson rode horses and chopped wood to show he was a man of the nation. Putin does the same sort of thing in Russia riding horses with his shirt off or in furs in mountains.

Liberal ownership sells too, Camping equipment, Holidays, Walks, Bikes and Boots along with all the other paraphernalia we need to go into the wilderness. Even today you only have to look at Windermere to see city dwellers venturing out in Kagools and boots around the town some venture no further than the towns streets.

US art photography developed from the “straight photography” of Stieglitz and Weston. Ansell Adams took it one level further portraying a primordial Eden. Minor White reviewed Stieglitz work “Equivalence”; he said “a photograph is a metaphor for the feelings of the artist”.

Aperture school was overwhelmed by the curatorship of John Swarkowski. (Here is that name again). He respected the work of Timothy O Sullivan in the civil war. He didn’t show straight images but the feeling in the scene. He curatted “American Landscapes”, in this work he included two women Laura Gilpin and Dorothea Lange even though many more women were practising at the time. He used one image from each woman whilst using four each from Edward Weston and Harry Callahan.

New Topographics tried to capture the feel of a scene. Old tyres, broken concrete, Jet plane contrails and Oil installations. Showing the chaos that underlines the ordinary lives of Americans.

In the 1970s photographers tried to hold the companies back who were exploiting the landscape by destroying their resources. However the big galleries and museums were funded by the same companies that were exploiting the land. Making funding of Art projects difficult to obtain and muting any dissident voice which spoke against them. Landscapes contain resource does the re-landscaping after the resource is taken make taking them right?

Lucy Lewent Three Mile Island Calendar (1964)

Images showing views “Three Mile Island” nuclear power plant and putting on a well researched calendar is a superb idea photographed by Lisa Lewenz. Selling the calendar for $6 made it available to all and bypassed the major sponsors of art. The voice wasn’t silenced.

The exclusion of women from the art world at this time wasn’t the same sort of prejudice. If we remove the big company sponsorship from art would it remove this censorship of art projects? The work should be on show for being good enough not because of who produced it. After all excellence has no race or gender.

However does running an all female issue of a magazine or competition put these old errors right. I think all the practitioners wanted their photographs accepted because of the merit of the work not because of the exclusion of others.

I chose to review Dorothea Lange’s photograph “Towards Los Angeles” in assignment four not because she is a woman but because it is a superb image.

Work Cited

Bierstadt, Albert. Gathering Storm in the Valley. 1891. Oil on Canvas. Nordsee Museum Husum.

Borzage, Frank. The Valley of the Silent Men. Black and White Cellulose, Western. Paramount Pictures, 1922.

Bright, Deborah. “‘Of Mother Nature and Marlboro Men.’” Accessed September 15, 2020.

Constable, John. The Haywain. 1821. Oil on Canvas, 130.2 cm × 185.4 cm (​51 1⁄4 in × 73 in). Room 34. The National Gallery, London. https://www.nationalgallery.org.uk/paintings/john-constable-the-hay-wain.

Leweng, Lucy. Views of Three Mile Island. 1967. Printed Calendar. Railroad Posters. 1960s. Varous On Magazine and Trains.

Rockwell, Norman. Stockbridge Main Street at Christmas. 1967. Oil on Board, 26½” x 95½”. Norman Rockwell Museum.

Shishkin, Ivan. Rain in the Oak Grove. 1891. Oli on Canvas, 203 x 124 cm (6’ 7.92″ x 4’ .82″). Tretyakov Gallery (Moscow Russian Federation).

Unknown. Landscape with Orpheus. 1570. Oil on Canvas, 35.6×45.7cm. 71.PB.64. John Getty Collection. http://www.getty.edu/art/collection/objects/604/unknown-maker-flemish-16th-century-landscape-with-orpheus-flemish-16th-century-about-1570/.

Excercise 4.3 Subjective voice.

I was introduced to the landscape at the age of about eleven when I completed the Yorkshire Three Peaks walk. These three hills felt like Everest to me at this time.

Whernside.

I went on to complete Duke of Edinburgh Bronze and Silver and had to complete proper hikes in both these awards. Navigating from Malham to Threshfield was a great introduction to using a compass.

Malham

At Eighteen I joined the Navy and took part in the Ten Tor’s in Devon another real test. Then on to Four days survival training in the Brecon Beacons. Living from and with nature was a real test. I learnt so much about the landscape and myself through all of these experiences.

The Cairngorms
The Brecon Beacons

After leaving the navy I continued my diving and travelled all over the world pursuing diving. From the mountains of Scotland to the Rock Islands of Palau and countless landscapes and seascapes between I have seen some of this planets wonders. Note I say some.

Rock Islands Palau

Recently I have been in Antarctica and the Arctic this takes me to the last wildernesses on our planet. These places have had a huge effect on my life, they are huge but oh so fragile.

Antarctica

I am no eco warrior but try to live my life to the best standards I can. Mending things rather than buying new. I walk to the shops instead of driving the car. I try to minimise the waste I produce to protect our fragile world.

Northern lights.

Some of my best experiences have been sitting up, in my sleeping bag looking at a cloudless night sky. And watching the Northern lights in Norway and Greenland.

I am fascinated by the animals in these places but don’t want be a scientist. I just enjoy knowing they are out there.

The people I have met can teach us so much from the man in the jungle who knows which plant treats what, to the Micronesian sailors who use sticks to navigate the vast Pacific Ocean. I hate when good meaning westerners want to introduce air conditioning, Coca Cola and the internet they don’t need it……..in my opinion.

Exercise 4.2 Landscape for everyone.

Landscape was a route to levels of emotion which were acceptable without being too nationalistic. These words sum up for me how we are in England fiercely proud without wanting to offend.

The Mutoscope imagined to look down on England’s history.

CFG Masteman wrote “looking down on England” in which he looks at landscape from the medieval jungle through the renaissance to the black blots of the industrial revolution. He uses a clever vehicle “the Mutoscope” for looking down on the landscape to see the changes in historic periods like a sped up film.

In 1940 the threat of invasion came from across the North Sea and Germany.

“Unconquered for a thousand years” is a phrase I find interesting as Germany talked about the Reich lasting a thousand years. We looked back they looked forward.

Patriotic propaganda talked about community in the village led by the Squire bringing people close to the past and nature. The inhabitants removed signposts and addresses from the scene to aid confusion to the enemy.

What are we fighting for.

The landscape became travelled through rather than enjoyed. Publishers such as the Pilgrim Library published books showing the idyll of previous landscape to remind people what they were were fighting for.

Picture Post juxtaposed photos showing a boy playing cricket in one then a young German boy in Hitler Youth uniform. Democracy against Militarianism. Another shows a half timbered cottage with the caption “England: Where a mans home becomes his castle”, all hint at what is being fought for.

What are we fighting for?

Civilians being bombed were shown with upturned faces showing their bravery and hinting at a brighter future once the turmoil had been endured.

Completing this made me think of the illustrated book by Raymond Briggs called “When the wind blows”. The same emotions were used to show how a nuclear attack would effect our grandparents who were from a simpler time. This made me want to absolutely defend them.

Promotional poster for the animation of the book.

Rework Assignment 3 A space that becomes a place!

After a delay when my tutor and I kept missing each other due to my adventures down South. I finally received an email from him with some areas to work on.

1. Research Anthropomorphism.

2. Add reference to environments having no emotions.

3. Identity of the birds in my photos.

4. Replace the shots for “That melted the wings wax”, “It was spring” and “A farmer was ploughing his field.

5. Read Derek Gregory “Between the book and the lamp”.

6. Write about the books I have been reading to research the course so far.

7. Add reference to other posts to link my work.

Over all my tutor liked my work and his suggestions added to the overall effect of the images and the words.

At first I didn’t agree with changing the image for the farmer ploughs his field. But on looking through my images and reviewing the painting again I realised that this line has to have the third element. So I replaced with a shot with a bird and a whale. The whale being the third element (The Farmer).

My work clearly states that things don’t have feelings so I am a little unsure what my tutor wants me to add. I will take this up with him on my return.

The birds in the shots are all either Petrels or Albatross. The final shot shows Wilson’s Storm Petrels which are the size of swallows and amaze how they survive in such a inhospitable place.

I have downloaded Gregory’s essay and will read and review it shortly.

Likewise I will add general reviews over the coming weeks of the books and such like I have researched to help my work develop. These I will publish shortly.

I added a link to my work so viewers can find background information about the events that inspired this assignment.

Below are the three pictures I added in response to my tutor feedback.